The Toad King is unpredictable. He's strange and funny and a little alien. He's is full of braggadocio and doubt and empathy and greed.
His voice should be unique and fun, especially since his story is being told in first person/present tense.
For the last couple of chapters, the Toad King has been just your normal adventure narrator. It's not completely wrong, because the story needed to move in a adventure direction and that required him doing things that were somewhat predictable.
But no more. The Toad King controls this story, not the plot!
I need to really nail down the Toad King's voice for the rest of the book. He needs to be quirky and surprising and a little bit alien.
So that's my goal for the day. To find that strangely smiling voice.
His voice should be unique and fun, especially since his story is being told in first person/present tense.
For the last couple of chapters, the Toad King has been just your normal adventure narrator. It's not completely wrong, because the story needed to move in a adventure direction and that required him doing things that were somewhat predictable.
But no more. The Toad King controls this story, not the plot!
I need to really nail down the Toad King's voice for the rest of the book. He needs to be quirky and surprising and a little bit alien.
So that's my goal for the day. To find that strangely smiling voice.